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The
Presents
Results
National Junior Online
Bush Poetry Competition 2008
for Australian school students or anyone from 6 to 18 years of age

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| Category A 6 - 12 years of age |
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2nd
3rd |
The Book of Australian Popular Rhymed Verse by Jim Haynes
Our Country - Classical Australian Poetry edited by Michael Cook
Our Country - Classical Australian Poetry edited by Michael Cook |
| Category B 13 - 18 years of age |
1st
2nd
3rd |
The Book of Australian Popular Rhymed Verse by Jim Haynes
Our Country - Classical Australian Poetry edited by Michael Cook
Rise 'n' Rhyme by Marco Gliori |
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| Category A 6 - 12 years of age |
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1st
2nd
3rd |
The ghastly Grocery Grannies
The Blue Tongue Lizard
Koala |
Gabrielle Morri
Seamus Coulson
Bianca Murray |
Western Australia
Queensland
Queensland |
Mel Maria Catholic Primary
Marist College Ashgrove
Gladstone West State School |
| Category B 13 - 18 years of age |
1st
2nd
3rd |
The Stockman's Horse
Ballad of Insomnia
He's Building Them a Fence |
Laura Leighton
Violet Macdonald
Violet Macdonald |
Queensland
Tasmania
Tasmania |
Mareeba State High School
Home Educated
Home Educated |
| Category A 6 - 12 years of age |
| Poem |
Author |
State |
School |
A Bouncy Kangaroo
Carefree Cockatoo Flock
True Blue
Funny and Energetic Australian
Animals in the Bush
The Brilliant Bush
Brumby |
Brittany Gorry
Gabrielle Morri
Amilia Schooley
Angela Krause
Krystal Alexis-Torres
Lucinda Carroll |
Queensland
Western Australia
Queensland
Queensland
Queensland
Queensland |
Miles State Primary School
Mel Maria Catholic Primary
Charleville School of Distance Education
Miles State Primary School
Ironside State School
Surfers Paradise Primary School |
| Category B 13 - 18 years of age |
Thunder Cracks
Camping Trip
This Autumn Morn’ |
Violet Macdonald
Kayla Reibelt
Ben Davies |
Tasmania
Queensland
Western Australia |
Home Educated
Earnshaw State College
Scotch College Swanbourne |
| Category A 6 - 12 years of age |
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© 2008 Gabrielle Morri
I was woken very early
by my Mum yesterday,
she yanked me out of bed,
bellowing, “It’s grocery shopping day!”
“Can this be quick and painless?”
I grumbled back at Mum,
“I’d rather play PS3
and sit on my bum!”
The aisles were deserted,
the shelves largely bare,
our squeaky trolley with the wonky wheel
gave me quite a scare.
The staff were all zombies,
an inkling - I now know,
that grocery day would be
an all-time shopping low.
The lights began to flicker,
the floorboards creaked and groaned,
“Mum, can we get this over with?”
I hastily moaned.
Then came...
The ghastly granny stampede
of cardigans and blue hair,
with mouldy noses and beady eyes,
I couldn’t escape their glare.
They sneered and chanted incessantly,
“No children allowed in the store.”
wrestled groceries and bombarded me,
I couldn’t stand anymore!
Grocery day had grown nightmarish,
a sideshow of decay,
I frantically dug my way out of there,
...and bolted far away!
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| Category B 13 - 18 years of age |
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© 2008 Laura Leighton
They were bringing in the cattle when the stockman’s horse went down
And the stockman knelt beside him as he lay there on the ground
He lifted up his old friend’s head and looked into his eyes
And knew by what was written there the horse would never rise.
“Old friend,” he said, “you’ve got me out of many nasty binds
You must have saved that stupid bull’s life half a dozen times.
No matter what the job at hand, you’ve always done your best
And never asked for anything but feed and time to rest.
You’re sure of mind and fleet of foot and proud of spirit too
You never threw me off, you never even dropped a shoe.
You know just how the cows will move, you never let them past you
I’ve seen myself you’ll go all day, and all the next still faster.
Remember when we ran through mud, I fell and almost died?
You didn’t move a step but stayed beside me all that night.
A loyal, loving, honest friend to meet was my good luck
You and I and open space; the pattern set got stuck.
Now I can buy another horse who’s fast and smart and young
But he won’t have these memories of all the things we’ve done.
Noble breeding’s well and good when prancing round a ring
But since I met you, now I know that blood’s not everything.
A great horse you have been my boy, you’ve never let me down.”
So said the stockman to his old friend lying on the ground.
“Mate,” he said, “you’ve done me proud, what more could I have asked?”
And so they watched the sunset as the old horse breathed his last. |
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Generally the standard of bush poetry writing in this competition was of a satisfactory to high standard. The imagery and ideas were impressive and the overall structure of the poetry commendable. Most students were accurate with the rhymes they used. In general more work needs to be done with generating a consistent metre. This requires the writer to account for the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables they choose to use. Hopefully teachers will be able to assist the students in acquiring this skill.
Please keep writing and sharing your stories with us.
Noel Stallard |
I was delighted to be invited to be on the judging panel for the first on-line poetry competition. The standard of the entries by our young poets was most impressive. There were some very unique entries and our young poets used some wonderful descriptions in their work. Although everyone cannot be a winner, I would like to congratulate every entrant for doing their best.
Remember: keep on trying!
Janine Haig |
Any-one, eighteen years of age or under, may post their own bush poetry in the youth section of the ABPA forum anytime.
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