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Dennis N O'Brien
 Post subject: Orange Clock Work
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:18 pm 
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Neville Briggs
 Post subject: Re: Orange Clock Work
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A bit hard for me Dennis. I could be wrong but I wondered if you are alluding to the long term effects of soldiers exposed to 2,4,5-T + dioxin known as agent orange.

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Dennis N O'Brien
 Post subject: Re: Orange Clock Work
PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 7:42 pm 
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The poem is a bit of a mixture really starting with the title
and I guess could be interpreted in different ways, but that's
not what I was thinking Neville, although it's an interesting take.
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Neville Briggs
 Post subject: Re: Orange Clock Work
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The sun ? but that's not orange. :roll:

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Dennis N O'Brien
 Post subject: Re: Orange Clock Work
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Next thing you'll be telling me the sky's not green. :|
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Maureen K Clifford
 Post subject: Re: Orange Clock Work
PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 12:50 pm 
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and here I was thinking it a tragic relic left over from the 60's - when orange, lime green, purple and mission brown ruled :lol: :lol: :lol: But I'm probably wrong - have been before :roll:

Fun write Dennis

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