THE SHOUT

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THE SHOUT

Post by manfredvijars » Sun Apr 24, 2011 12:23 pm

THE SHOUT
(c) 2009 Manfred Vijars
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Neville Briggs
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Re: THE SHOUT

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:34 pm

Ah Manfred you're getting better and better at this.

This poem is excellent,I think, you made a sort of conversational style that flows over the metric structure and gives the perfect impression of the scene, at once chatty and informal but at the same time with unspoken limits to what is acceptable even in an informal setting.
I am sure that you have got that right.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

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