ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

THE SHOUT
(c) 2009 Manfred Vijars

Ah Manfred you're getting better and better at this.

This poem is excellent,I think, you made a sort of conversational style that flows over the metric structure and gives the perfect impression of the scene, at once chatty and informal but at the same time with unspoken limits to what is acceptable even in an informal setting.
I am sure that you have got that right.