ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

Fabulous - a bit of Mr Sheen and it will sparkle like a diamond. Some good strong lines in there Marty I particularly liked

Try to spot the gecko motionless against the mottled stone .
Is that him of just a piece of flaking wall ?
Was that movement or a shadow? No! You’ve lost him once again ,
at hiding he’s the master of them all

though you need a ? mark and a ! to make it tighter IMO

Good writing Marty

Cheers

Maureen