A reckless young man named Billy
devoured fifteen bowls of Thai chilli.
He said " That was beaut "
as he started his ute,
dispersing effluvium pungently.
homework 19/3/12
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Neville Briggs
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homework 19/3/12
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" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: homework 19/3/12
you would have been forgiven Neville had you used - Pungentilly 
to keep the rhyme Mate 
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Re: homework 19/3/12
Close enough Maureen 
rhyme is only a decoration.
rhyme is only a decoration. Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.