Homework W/E 18/3/2013 - My Haiku

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Homework W/E 18/3/2013 - My Haiku

Post by Peely » Mon Mar 04, 2013 1:30 pm

MY HAIKU
© John Peel 4/3/2013

I tried a haiku
once, but to my dismay, I
had too much to say…
John Peel - The Man from Gilmore Creek

warooa

Re: Homework W/E 18/3/2013 - My Haiku

Post by warooa » Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:16 pm

That's beautiful Peely - and the trailing-off ellipsis just says it all :D

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:28 pm

I know that feeling well John :lol: :lol: :lol: Good on you for joining in

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Re: Homework W/E 18/3/2013 - My Haiku

Post by Peely » Mon Mar 04, 2013 9:58 pm

Thanks Marty P and Maureen
John Peel - The Man from Gilmore Creek

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