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Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2021 10:15 am
by Terry
Never written one of these before,
This one sound a bit more like ‘Confuses Says’
Haiku – Dawning
When the mind can see
What the heart already knows
you have inner peace
Terry
Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2021 10:28 am
by Ron
Liked it Terry, succinct with a deep message. (better than that confuses bloke!
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Cheers
Ron
Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2021 11:42 am
by Terry
Thanks Ron
Terry
Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2021 3:09 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
WOW!
I love it Terry - well done you - for a first go that is pretty damn good
Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2021 6:55 pm
by Terry
Thanks Maureen
Terry
Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2021 4:44 pm
by Catherine Lee
Lovely, Terry - deep and serene
Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2021 6:26 pm
by Shelley Hansen
That's a beauty, Terry!
Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'
Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2021 9:06 pm
by Terry
Thanks Catherine & Shelley
This is all new stuff for me, but I can see the possibilities.
Terry