An Unwritten Letter

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An Unwritten Letter

Post by Terry » Sun Feb 13, 2022 10:46 am

A line from Maureen’s poem triggered this,
“if only you could take the time to walk awhile in my shoes”

AN UNWRITTEN LETTER

I have walked back through the ages to the time it all began,
and old memories come back to haunt, the way they often can.
Lived again the rollercoaster of the life that I have had,
Saw it as it really was back then, the good times and the bad.

Not the sanitised short version of mistakes along the way,
or the oft selected memory we tend to now display,
For I’ve lived again the heartaches that we all endure in life,
balanced by life’s romance far away from mundane things and strife.

So I need not write a letter now I’ve looked into the past,
best to let the past remain the past, and make this time my last.

© T.E. Piggott

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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by Shelley Hansen » Mon Feb 14, 2022 4:06 pm

Well said, Terry!
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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by Catherine Lee » Tue Feb 15, 2022 5:24 pm

Shelley is right - this is well said, Terry. Those first two lines are instantly relatable, and your last two say it all as far on dwelling on the past too much goes.

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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Feb 18, 2022 11:27 am

Well we can't go back Terry, and having regrets is a bit of a useless pastime as well. My old Mum used to say 'least said, soonest mended' and I guess there is a certain wisdom in that. I often say to myself (and others) that all decisions we make/made were what appeared to be the best decisions and/or the only answer at the time. We don't have a crystal ball and if history proves us wrong so be it.

Charitably (it doesn't always work) I try to allow our politicians the same privilege. Your poem kind of says the same thing I feel - we all need to be kinder to ourselves I suspect .. there is good and bad in everything
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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by Terry » Sat Feb 19, 2022 9:28 am

Thanks Shelley, Catherine & Maureen.

It was an interesting topic and between us we looked at it from several angles.

Probably the thing that stood out for me, was we can't change the past, but can take lessons from it.

Still love that line of yours Maureen!

Terry

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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by Ron » Sat Feb 19, 2022 5:03 pm

How did I miss this one ! :?
Good one Terry, puts it all in perspective and sums it up nicely!
It also brings memories of a few lines from Henry, not sure what poem it came from though. I actually read it on a wine label, (from Mudgee no doubt).

You must never admit a suggestion
That old things are good to recall;
You must never answer the question:
"Was I happier then, after all?"

Well done mate,
Ron

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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by Terry » Thu Feb 24, 2022 7:29 pm

Thanks Ron

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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by mummsie » Thu Feb 24, 2022 8:57 pm

Love this Terry!
I imagine many “unwritten letters” have been toted by the campfire throughout your years prospecting-there’s something rather healing about a night under the stars staring into blazing coals I’m sure you’d agree.

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Re: An Unwritten Letter

Post by Terry » Fri Mar 04, 2022 10:49 pm

Thanks Sue.

Still miss it as well.

Terry

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