Homework Jan 2023 / Tragedy at Lake Darlot
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2023 12:37 pm
Tragedy At Lake Darlot
Based on a true story – I have stood and viewed the graves -
There’s a lot more to the story of course.
I have also slipped in a couple of extra syllables into the second line of the first stanza – can’t let a small technical hitch spoil a good line!
I’d had come across this story from a bloke I use to know,
as we sipped a coldie in the front bar, at kookynie, years ago.
And some thirty years now later I am camped here at that spot,
near an old, abandoned graveyard, time had long ago forgot.
And was trying to recall again, the story I’d been told,
of a tragedy that happened, in the early days of gold.
Sleep that night was restless with my mind still trying to recall,
as it trawled for faded memories, through cobwebs dust and all.
Even as I slept it searched for fleeting shadows from the past,
through the empty void of darkness where such memories may last.
That were hidden in the mists of time, till woken then somehow,
when at first a merest glimmer, turned into a flood here now.
I was woken by the chorus though the sun was yet to rise,
As I wandered to the graveyard to now view through sleepy eyes.
There among the poignant nameless mounds where pioneers now lay,
two small headstones, first a boy, and then his dad who’d died next day.
And a sadness had then touched me as I thought what this would mean,
for a wife and mother, and the tragedy, this must have been.
And the pain of loss would linger long beyond the early tears,
leaving bitter memories for her, that then would last for years.
****
© T.E. Piggott
Based on a true story – I have stood and viewed the graves -
There’s a lot more to the story of course.
I have also slipped in a couple of extra syllables into the second line of the first stanza – can’t let a small technical hitch spoil a good line!
I’d had come across this story from a bloke I use to know,
as we sipped a coldie in the front bar, at kookynie, years ago.
And some thirty years now later I am camped here at that spot,
near an old, abandoned graveyard, time had long ago forgot.
And was trying to recall again, the story I’d been told,
of a tragedy that happened, in the early days of gold.
Sleep that night was restless with my mind still trying to recall,
as it trawled for faded memories, through cobwebs dust and all.
Even as I slept it searched for fleeting shadows from the past,
through the empty void of darkness where such memories may last.
That were hidden in the mists of time, till woken then somehow,
when at first a merest glimmer, turned into a flood here now.
I was woken by the chorus though the sun was yet to rise,
As I wandered to the graveyard to now view through sleepy eyes.
There among the poignant nameless mounds where pioneers now lay,
two small headstones, first a boy, and then his dad who’d died next day.
And a sadness had then touched me as I thought what this would mean,
for a wife and mother, and the tragedy, this must have been.
And the pain of loss would linger long beyond the early tears,
leaving bitter memories for her, that then would last for years.
****
© T.E. Piggott