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Re: Nothing more to say.

Post by Heather » Thu Jun 19, 2014 1:54 pm

...it sounds a bit dum de dum to me..... :)
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Post by Stephen Whiteside » Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:08 am

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Post by Heather » Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:06 am

I'll take that as "Durr" :)
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Re: Nothing more to say.

Post by Vic Jefferies » Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:27 am

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Re: Nothing more to say.

Post by Mal McLean » Fri Jun 20, 2014 7:09 pm

Kinda reminds me of of Paddy O'Brien's dripping tap masterpiece. Although, possibly, Stephens work has more depth. A long, thorough analysis may needed to truly plumb the reaches of this new masterpiece.

I myself am working on my crowning achievement, Digital Birds

Here is a short extract:

112112112
2112112
112112112
21212121!

Clever? No? The false rhyme is not false at all but designed to lead your eyes away from the ultimate truth.

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:43 pm

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Re: Nothing more to say.

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:46 am

Mal, you are an idiot! Talk about laugh!
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Re: Nothing more to say.

Post by Mal McLean » Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:10 am

:D
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Post by manfredvijars » Sat Jun 21, 2014 10:24 am

Mal McLean wrote:I myself am working on my crowning achievement, Digital Birds

Here is a short extract:

112112112 ......

Clever? No!!!...
Sorry Mal, Wrong with a capital W.
To be truly 'digital' you need to be in binary which means 0, 1.

So, your first verse should read, 110110110 .....
or the obverse, which appears correct, 001001001 ...

There ... pure poetry in numbers ... :)

And youre still an idiot ... :D
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Re: Nothing more to say.

Post by Mal McLean » Sat Jun 21, 2014 12:22 pm

I wondered if any one would pick that up.

My genius son says it's not so Manfred.

That's just the accepted wisdom.

Any fixed value as opposed to any other fixed value works just as well.

Any way, Two is the loneliest number since the number one..... :D

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