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Rhymings ...

Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 1:26 am
by manfredvijars
He lost his leg after it went purple,
(Fell off his horse with an unsecured curple.
Now brand new crutches help with his hirple.

I think you'll find its green not orange
That part of the fern that's called the sporange.

It cost lots of gold and silver
Making Silence of the Chilver.

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 8:21 am
by Neville Briggs
There was this old bushified Balt
who, greatly inspired by malt,
would think it no crime
to murder the rhyme
in a desperate doggerel assault.

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:05 am
by warooa
:lol: Brilliant Nev

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:32 pm
by manfredvijars
Bahhhhh .... (Bloody Philistines) .... :evil:

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:57 pm
by Neville Briggs
:lol: The Philistines were highly cultured people, Delilah apparently was.


Though one of my school teachers for some reason, thought that I might have descended from the Visigoths. :)


On the matter of rhyme Manfred, is it good practice in poetry to have rhyme drawing attention to itself ( known as clanging rhyme ) unless is it intended for comical effect.

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:29 pm
by manfredvijars
Nuh! ... You don't get it ... :o

Those three little ditties are ALL perfect rhymes and no 'made up' words ...

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 6:43 am
by Bob Pacey
You are really bored aren't ya Manny.


Go fishing mate it relaxes you and you get to practice new poems.


Bob

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 8:46 am
by Neville Briggs
Of course I "get it " , I realized that they are not made up. ;)


" Verse forms do not define poetic form; they simply express it. It is an important distinction "
Mark Strand. The Making of a Poem.

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 7:37 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Nothing rhymes with those words said someone - another myth shot down in flames :roll: :o Who in their right mind would call their little lamby Chilver? Most unflattering name :( :?

Re: Rhymings ...

Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2014 6:55 am
by Neville Briggs
Thank you Maureen, I rest my case. ;) ;) :)