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				Rhymings ...
				Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 1:26 am
				by manfredvijars
				He lost his leg after it went purple,
(Fell off his horse with an unsecured curple.
Now brand new crutches help with his hirple. 
I think you'll find its green not orange
That part of the fern that's called the sporange.
It cost lots of gold and silver
Making Silence of the Chilver.
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 8:21 am
				by Neville Briggs
				There was this old bushified Balt
who, greatly inspired by malt,
would think it no crime
to murder the rhyme
in a desperate doggerel assault.
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:05 am
				by warooa
				
 Brilliant Nev
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:32 pm
				by manfredvijars
				Bahhhhh .... (Bloody Philistines) ....  

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:57 pm
				by Neville Briggs
				
  The Philistines were highly cultured people,  Delilah apparently was. 
Though one of my school teachers for some reason, thought that I might have descended from the Visigoths.  
 
On the matter of rhyme Manfred, is it good practice in poetry to have rhyme drawing attention to itself  ( known as clanging rhyme )  unless is it intended for comical effect.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:29 pm
				by manfredvijars
				Nuh! ... You don't get it ...   
Those three little ditties are ALL perfect rhymes and no 'made up' words ...
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 6:43 am
				by Bob Pacey
				You are really bored aren't ya Manny.
Go fishing mate it relaxes you and you get to practice new poems.
Bob
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 8:46 am
				by Neville Briggs
				Of course I "get it " , I realized that they are not made up.   
 
" Verse forms do not define poetic form; they simply express it. It is an important distinction "
Mark Strand. The Making of a Poem.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 7:37 pm
				by Maureen K Clifford
				
			 
			
					
				Re: Rhymings ...
				Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2014 6:55 am
				by Neville Briggs