rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' word
Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
... get a bit creative, play with words, push the sounds and have a bit of fun, we've got a great palette of language to choose from so there is no need to look for the obvious and predictable.
There's ALWAYS a another (sometimes better) way to say something.
I think sometimes we forget we're "Wordsmiths".
sanctuary - sang/sank during
There's ALWAYS a another (sometimes better) way to say something.
I think sometimes we forget we're "Wordsmiths".
sanctuary - sang/sank during
Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
If we go with the assumption that sanctuary is 4 syllables, the rhyme doesn't have to be a four syllable word, what about two x two syllable words ...
pretty fairy
Donald's dairy
or three x one or two syllable words ...
big and hairy
lamb called Mary
oh so scary
... not meaning that any of the above would suit your poem, I'm just showing that you can use two or three words together to rhyme with a four syllable word.
If you want sanctuary to be 3 syllables, I think it would be /-- not /-/ as far as stressed syllables go, as we would say SANC-tu-ry not SANC-tu-RY.
I reckon that if it's getting too tricky, you'd be better off rearranging that line or finding a different word.
pretty fairy
Donald's dairy
or three x one or two syllable words ...
big and hairy
lamb called Mary
oh so scary
... not meaning that any of the above would suit your poem, I'm just showing that you can use two or three words together to rhyme with a four syllable word.
If you want sanctuary to be 3 syllables, I think it would be /-- not /-/ as far as stressed syllables go, as we would say SANC-tu-ry not SANC-tu-RY.
I reckon that if it's getting too tricky, you'd be better off rearranging that line or finding a different word.

Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
Manfred, what do you mean by "sanctuary - sang/sank during"???
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Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
Kym I think he has got it muddled with the Titanic




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Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
Manfred has said it ,
There's another option, do blank verse.
manfredvijars wrote:... get a bit creative, play with words, push the sounds and have a bit of fun, we've got a great palette of language to choose from so there is no need to look for the obvious and predictable.
There's ALWAYS a another (sometimes better) way to say something.
I think sometimes we forget we're "Wordsmiths".
As Neil said....keats wrote:You could always use a different word than sanctuary
There's another option, do blank verse.

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Hey neville I rite a poem in Blank verse but what is wong me tip ritter s ribbon dunt print it mate
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Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
SANCTURY sounds like: Sang During .. or Sank DuringKym wrote:Manfred, what do you mean by "sanctuary - sang/sank during"???
ICE CREAM sounds like: I scream
etc. ....

Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
...titanic ..Maureen K Clifford wrote:Kym I think he has got it muddled with the Titanic![]()
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Re: rhyme for 'sanctuary'...using a single syllable 'ee' wor
Hey Tom by now I would have given up and gone found
some place to hide.
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