Beautiful Poem

Discuss or chat on any topic not covered by above forums.
ONLY Registered Forum Members have access to this Forum.
User avatar
Bob Pacey
Moderator
Posts: 7479
Joined: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:18 am
Location: Yeppoon

Beautiful Poem

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:37 pm

I hope this poem has the same effect on you as it did on me - then my forwarding it will be worth the effort. Walk with me by the water - worth the read...

A BEAUTIFUL POEM ABOUT GROWING OLDER:


Bugger I Forgot The Words.
You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
Last edited by Bob Pacey on Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

Terry
Posts: 3401
Joined: Mon Nov 01, 2010 6:53 pm

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Terry » Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:50 pm

I don't know what we're going to do with you Bob, nice picture though.

Ellis Campbell has lovely Poem Called 'WALK ME BY THE RIVER' that's worth a read

Terry

User avatar
Maureen K Clifford
Posts: 8160
Joined: Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:31 am
Location: Ipswich - Paul Pisasale country and home of the Ipswich Poetry Feast
Contact:

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Nov 10, 2011 8:36 am

If the words were forgotten – here are some new ones

As sunset fades at end of day gold reflections touch waters calm.
Reflect a moment, realize, that life is good and full of charm.
Just look around – what do you see – this beauty came from God above
How blessed are we that we can live here free from fear with those we love.

Maureen Clifford ©
Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/


I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.

User avatar
Dave Smith
Posts: 1726
Joined: Wed Nov 03, 2010 9:12 pm
Location: Collie W A

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Dave Smith » Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:36 pm

Not only that Marty NO Bl***y hand rails, if the kids don't get poisoned they will drown.

TTFN :twisted:
I Keep Trying

User avatar
Mal McLean
Posts: 521
Joined: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:40 pm
Location: North Lakes

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Mal McLean » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:45 am

I totally understood that Bob!!

Must be getting older!


Mal
Preserve the Culture!

User avatar
Bob Pacey
Moderator
Posts: 7479
Joined: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:18 am
Location: Yeppoon

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Bob Pacey » Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:35 pm

Once again just for you Mal.

Well I must be getting older
And I don't know who to blame
All the words now have new meanings
Though they still sound just the same.

And I was so good at English
Now I get the words all wrong
cause when I put them in a sentence
its just like they don't belong.

Like, when a bloke was really happy
it used to be ok to say " He's gay "
a “Rap” was how you hit a door
And Hi ! just meant gidday.

“Grass" was grown upon your lawn
We used a "Pot" to cook a stew
A “Score” was what your team made
And a "Dope" meant silly you.

A “Dyke” that was just a little dam
A “Poof” a puff of smoke
and “Bread” was flour and water
Now if you've got none well your broke

And “Cactus” was a prickly plant
But now it means your dead
a “Joint” was an old run down shack
A place to rest your weary head.

If someone had a bit of luck
we'ed say that's really slick
now when somethings great mate
well they say its "fully sick".

" Acid" was something that we used
in Chemistry at school
and winter was the only time
that we were really " Cool ".

A "Trip" meant falling over
when we tangled up our feet
And lollies were the only thing
that we could say were " Sweet ".

And we put "ice" into our eskys
just to cool our beer and rum
and the only "Smack" I ever got
was on me bloody bum.

People stopped you in the street
to talk about the weather
now when you ask a question
the kids simply say " What ever ".

Well I’ve tried to understand it
It's progress I've been told
But I really have to face it mate
Gees I must be getting old.


Bob Pacey ( C )
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Nov 12, 2011 1:01 pm

Yes you are getting old Bob ;) :D but what you have portrayed here is the evidence that the English language changes continually. If the world keeps turning long enough for our great grandchildren to converse, I am sure they will be able to say the same things about 21st Century speech as you have said about 20th Century speech.

I like your poem, witty and neatly done ;)
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

Kym

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Kym » Sat Nov 12, 2011 4:10 pm

Good one Bob!
:lol:

User avatar
Zondrae
Moderator
Posts: 2292
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 9:04 am
Location: Illawarra

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Zondrae » Mon Nov 14, 2011 7:22 am

G'da Bob,

One question.. where's the boat?
Zondrae King
a woman of words

User avatar
Bob Pacey
Moderator
Posts: 7479
Joined: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:18 am
Location: Yeppoon

Re: Beautiful Poem

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Nov 14, 2011 7:42 am

Upside down in the backyard at the moment Zondrae, dogs chewed all the indicator wireing on the trailer and I have to figure out where all the wires go ???


Might just buy an indicator board.

Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

Post Reply