Collaborative Poem 8 - The Plastered Cockatoo

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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo

Post by mummsie » Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:27 am

I love it, Bob take note, thats what the rum will do to you.
Thanks for that John
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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:37 am

These collaborations IMO are always such fun Sue and I agree - thank you John for kicking it off....did it take you to places you have never been? :lol: :lol:

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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo

Post by mummsie » Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:25 pm

Yes Maureen, found myself looking up bird names, still had a few to use, that poem could have gone on forever.
Enjoyed the fun.
Sue
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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:55 pm

Yeah and I thought I'd finished it Sue but true to form a woman has to have the last word. !!!!!!!



:roll: :roll:

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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo

Post by Jasper Brush » Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:47 pm

I'm flabbergasted. :D

I thank every one of you.

You have done a fine job. You have shown respect to me, as a person, to take time to contribute to this poem. :D

Thank you.

Yes, things can be tidied up a bit. Though, this happens with all poetry.


TO the Plastered Cockatoo. :D Raise your glass. :shock:

Regards,

John

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Re: The Plastered Cockatoo

Post by warooa » Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:02 am

Onya John . . . that was fun, had us all in a flap :roll: (note to self: don't start a pun war, Sue wins hands down everytime).

And very nicely tied off at the end there Maureen with that "richer/twitcher" rhyme.

Good fun.

Marty

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