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COLLABORATIVE POEM 9 - A HELPING HAND
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 3:04 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Lets see what comes from this one- I started it after the floods but it went on the back burner -was trying to get across the message that help comes in many disguises- not always directly - because some folks and animals don't take kindly to help. and so sometimes it is more of a hand up type of gesture It started with the analogy about the sparrow that no doubt you are all familiar with -
Structured it as ABABCCCD -EFEFGGGD- etc etc and since I finally finished it I have moved it from here.
Re: COLLABORATIVE POEM 8 - A HELPING HAND
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:19 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
The end rhyme on each line eg side/hide = A ; willow/pillow = B; ground/bound/sound = C; thwarted/supported/comforted = D etc etc
Re: COLLABORATIVE POEM 8 - A HELPING HAND
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:59 pm
by Bob Pacey
Nah gonna have another rum and watch tv ????
Bobbbbbo
Re: COLLABORATIVE POEM 8 - A HELPING HAND
Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:43 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Yes Bob well that's pretty much what I did to and why it has sat so long untouched
but someone out there might have some ideas
Re: COLLABORATIVE POEM 9 - A HELPING HAND
Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:22 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
OK Miss Heather - so where did it go????????
Re: COLLABORATIVE POEM 9 - A HELPING HAND
Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:31 pm
by Heather
I know NOTHING - this is the first time I have visited. Must be the gremlins Maureen......
Re: COLLABORATIVE POEM 9 - A HELPING HAND
Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2013 9:12 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Look like this on has already gone walkabout