Mrs Mickey's Menu
Mrs Mickey's Menu
MRS MICKEY"S MENU TOLD By DAVE SMITH. WRITTEN BY ZONDRAE KING
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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu
Found it a bit halting in places Dave. Probably because as you said you are reading and that interupts the flow. Learning it would produce a better result I think as it will allow a bit more voice inflection at the funny bits of which there are quite a few.
A good yarn Zondrae.
Bob
A good yarn Zondrae.
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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu
Thanks Bill
Bob that is one of my early attempts at recording and I tended to rush a bit. I have slowed down and now don’t have to read it. I use it a bit and always get a good response.
TTFN
Bob that is one of my early attempts at recording and I tended to rush a bit. I have slowed down and now don’t have to read it. I use it a bit and always get a good response.
TTFN
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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu
It's still good Dave - Zondrae that is such a pearler, everytime I read it or hear it I ROTFL because it is just SO true
cheers
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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu
Goodonya Dave. You're having a go. It's not easy, as I have found. Your pronunciation is clear and easy to follow.
I'm very grateful to old Bill the battler who has helped me a lot with advice on recording.
I hear someone in the background on yours. I wonder how a recording with an audience would go. I've heard one of the contemporary poets do that on a radio program.
I'm very grateful to old Bill the battler who has helped me a lot with advice on recording.
I hear someone in the background on yours. I wonder how a recording with an audience would go. I've heard one of the contemporary poets do that on a radio program.
Neville
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" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.