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Re: The Power

Posted: Sun May 08, 2016 10:14 am
by Terry
Strange things are happening here!
I was sure I commented some days ago - ah well try again.

I'm certainly no judge of this sort of poetry as you know,
But it has grown since the last time I saw it - I like it.

Terry

Re: The Power

Posted: Sun May 08, 2016 11:31 am
by Shelley Hansen
Heather, I love it! My favourite form of writing - the metaphor! It works well with bush poetry too - but there is even more scope for imagination with free verse.

I could just see your words dancing, laughing - and looking up at you from the page :D

Brilliant!

Cheers
Shelley

Re: The Power

Posted: Sun May 08, 2016 10:01 pm
by Heather
Thanks Terry and thanks for nudging me to work on it.

Thank you Shelley. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's been a bit of fun.

Heather :)