G'day Kym...
Apart from simply enjoying the poem for itself, I would award you one of those gold star thingies that used to be available on the "old" site if I could. It's terrific to see contributors like yourself, Mad Mick, Hully and others offering variations from the "formulaic". The "change-up" in the last stanza is very effective in my opinion.
Cheers, Will.
Driftwood Dreaming
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Re: Driftwood Dreaming
"Each poet that I know (he said)
has something funny in his head..." CJD
has something funny in his head..." CJD
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Re: Driftwood Dreaming
Always pleasant to read one of Kym's poems.
Merv.
Merv.
Some days your the pidgeon and other days the statue.