GRACE
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Neville Briggs
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Re: GRACE
Because it's not about girls, it's about boys.

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Neville Briggs
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Ah my friends , remember, it's a poem, not a yarn. Clive James on the TV on Tuesday night said that of all the arts, poetry is the distillation of experience.
I was not relating what had become of them, but distilling what had become of me.
Like the Apostle Paul wrote
" When I was a child,
I thought like a child,
I spoke like a child.
When I became a man
I put away childish things "
I was not relating what had become of them, but distilling what had become of me.
Like the Apostle Paul wrote
" When I was a child,
I thought like a child,
I spoke like a child.
When I became a man
I put away childish things "
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Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Isn't there a law about distilling in your own home?
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
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Maybe it's OK if you have a Poetic Licence.
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
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People who produce home distillate generally have trouble standing up anywhere. (Sorry Neville - I am sure you are the exception!)
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Neville Briggs
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Distillation of experience is a vital concept for writing poetry. If anyone wants to write poetry they cannot hope to succeed unless they grapple with that concept.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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I imagine you are right, Neville - though I don't quite know what you mean - but I don't think you should ever explain your poetry. If somebody is struggling to understand it, it's not your problem.
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
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