A High Country Poem

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A High Country Poem

Post by Peely » Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:06 am

A High Country Poem
© John Peel 22/7/08

As I sit astride my horse’s back and view the icy scene,
The countryside is silent, it is peaceful and serene.
I’ve got about a mile to ride, an icy creek to ford,
But I’m feeling quite an awful pain that cannot be ignored.
I’ve got to get down from the horse and let it all run free –
Being stuck here in the cold has made me want a pee!

Originally submitted as a homework poem for the Illawarra Bush Poets weekly topic. That particular week, it was a painting of a rider on a horse in a high country snow scene and you had to write to that theme.
John Peel - The Man from Gilmore Creek

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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:31 am

Yes, we get the same problem sailing. It's something about putting your wetsuit on that seems to put the whole process in motion!
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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Jun 12, 2011 7:33 am

Enlightening gentlemen :lol: Thank you for sharing :?
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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by Heather » Sun Jun 12, 2011 9:52 am

Not quite what I expected from you John. :lol:

Go before you get in the wet suit on your horse you sillies! Duh! :roll:

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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by Bob Pacey » Sun Jun 12, 2011 9:59 am

Waders when you are fishing in the surf have the same effect Stephen !!!! Just have to grin and bear it.


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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by william williams » Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:41 am

hey bob don't break wind as it makes your waders swell up. OH PEW

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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by Peely » Sun Jun 12, 2011 12:22 pm

G'day All

I am sure that it has something to do with the environment around being wet, cold or both. Even if you have been before putting a wetsuit/waders on, you seem to need to go at a sooner time than normal. Like Bob, I am familiar with waders - though in my case it is normally in trout streams with blackberry-lined banks. Never tried a wetsuit though.

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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:03 pm

Heather - I wish it was that simple. Trouble is, you don't THINK you need to go. Then you put your web-suit on, and realise you're going to be trapped out on the water for a few hours, and you're suddenly not so SURE. So you go back and take your wetsuit off, and find you were right the FIRST TIME. So you put it back on again, but you've still got a bit of a nagging feeling, because you were starting to run a bit late by the time you'd got it off the second time, and you were a bit rushed...
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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by Heather » Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:12 pm

Well I know one thing for sure - I'm not getting in any swimming pool with you lot - eewww! :(

Heather :)

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Re: A High Country Poem

Post by thestoryteller » Wed Jun 15, 2016 7:57 am

Even worse when you have diabetes Peely.

Brought a smile mate.


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