Re: Hey Frog !
Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 1:10 pm
Good on you Marty. I think it's great to see short impulsive verse from passing experience. That's the way to do it I reckon. Should be encouraged. 
Don't faint
but twice today I must say I agree with Neville. Those spontaneous poems (I call them elbow poems) are usually the best.
I notice a little internal rhyme as well, yep, well done mate.