ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

Goodonya, Marty. I knew you could do it.

You knew I could think??

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Campfires, good company and a few beverages under a night sky , it doesnt get any better than that

Point taken. I didn't mean to sound patronising. It's just that I know how I have felt in situations like that in the past - and my first thought is usually that I can't do it. But then, as you say, you go away and start to pick away at the problem, and eventually the solution falls into place.

Nah didn't see it as patronising , I had read it over a few times and adjusted the metre but did not even see the way the rhyming pattern was out in such an obvious way , was too caught up in getting the metre correct or at least more correct than it was

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Campfires, good company and a few beverages under a night sky , it doesnt get any better than that

Dreams can turn into nightmares but what must it be like to not
have dreams?
Good poem.

Can nightmares turn into dreams also, Dennis? I hope so. Sounds like the idea for a poem...

"Thanks" Marty.

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Writer of Rhyme havin' a Good Time.

a Backward Poet who Writes Inverse.

I like that one Marty,
Written with real feeling and that's what it's all about mate.

Cheers Terry

Enjoyed the read Marty.

Heather

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take,
but by the moments that take our breath away!

Thanks all , glad you enjoyed the read

Marty

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Campfires, good company and a few beverages under a night sky , it doesnt get any better than that