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Simon of Cyrene
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- Zondrae
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
G'day Marty, and everyone,
As I understand it, the criteria that you have expressed is the standard for 'competition'. I agree with your comment so far. However, not everything that we are inspired to write (and share) strictly conforms. Also it is refreshing not to be swamped by poems about blowflies, shearers, swaggies or 'flood and drought' and it takes courage to step a little away and post a poem with a difference.
As I understand it, the criteria that you have expressed is the standard for 'competition'. I agree with your comment so far. However, not everything that we are inspired to write (and share) strictly conforms. Also it is refreshing not to be swamped by poems about blowflies, shearers, swaggies or 'flood and drought' and it takes courage to step a little away and post a poem with a difference.
Zondrae King
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
Just a comment.
Sorry Zondrae but what Marty has quoted is on the homepage for the site.
The objectives of the Australian Bush Poets Association is to foster and encourage the growth of Bush Poetry in Australia. By definition, Australian Bush Poetry is metred and rhymed poetry about Australia, Australians and/or the Australian way of life.
I don't mind a bit of variety either so long as it does not become the norm. Plenty of sites available to express our inner self.
Bob
Sorry Zondrae but what Marty has quoted is on the homepage for the site.
The objectives of the Australian Bush Poets Association is to foster and encourage the growth of Bush Poetry in Australia. By definition, Australian Bush Poetry is metred and rhymed poetry about Australia, Australians and/or the Australian way of life.
I don't mind a bit of variety either so long as it does not become the norm. Plenty of sites available to express our inner self.
Bob
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
One could argue that Simon of Cyrene is a part of the Easter story, which we will all be celebrating shortly all over Australia.
That makes it topical, at least, although I appreciate not everyone will celebrate in a religious sense.
I for one am looking forward to a few days R&R.
Robyn
That makes it topical, at least, although I appreciate not everyone will celebrate in a religious sense.
I for one am looking forward to a few days R&R.
Robyn
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
There's your Australian connection, Marty - what else could that be but a bunch of bogan Collingwood supporters leaving the "G" late on Sat'dy arvoowly wrote:
A rabble of people ahead choked the way,
an urgent tone to their cries.
Some were rejoicing while still others wept,
and some had fear in their eyes.
But seriously, not detracting from Wendy's poem - it's grandly written and I'm sure she herself agrees it doesn't perfectly conform to the said criteria, BUT . . . lets celebrate it for what it is, not what it isn't.
Marty
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Good on ya Marty. Right on it there. Hear hear.warooa wrote:lets celebrate it for what it is, not what it isn't.
Neville
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
I don't mind a bit of variety either so long as it does not become the norm. Plenty of sites available to express our inner self.
Robyn
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
Sorry Robyn !!! duh Please explain ???
Of course we can On this site Robyn but there are plenty of other sites where we can also do it in other styles.
Is this what you meant ?????
After all I'm a bloke.
Gotta go got a show to do at Seven.
Cheers Bob
Of course we can On this site Robyn but there are plenty of other sites where we can also do it in other styles.
Is this what you meant ?????
After all I'm a bloke.
Gotta go got a show to do at Seven.
Cheers Bob
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
Thankks Bob, that's gret. I wasn't sure what you meant, and I just wanted to make sure.

Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.
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Re: Simon of Cyrene
Hi everyone, I'm loving this debate - here's how I see it.....
‘twas Jesus of Nazareth, God’s only son
en-route to suffer for me.
If I said "en-route to suffer for you and me" (presumed), it would be more accurate and then
being about us - Australians, or some Australian's veiw of things - it would meet the criteria as sure as a
poem about the Easter Bunny hopping about, or Santa's adventures later in the year.
(By the way, I hope the Easter Bunny stocks up before he hops by my place!)
But, the meter would be shot!!
‘twas Jesus of Nazareth, God’s only son
en-route to suffer for me.
If I said "en-route to suffer for you and me" (presumed), it would be more accurate and then
being about us - Australians, or some Australian's veiw of things - it would meet the criteria as sure as a
poem about the Easter Bunny hopping about, or Santa's adventures later in the year.
(By the way, I hope the Easter Bunny stocks up before he hops by my place!)
But, the meter would be shot!!
Wen de Rhymewriter There is nothing mundane about the ordinary.