Hey Frog !
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Neville Briggs
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Re: Hey Frog !
Good on you Marty. I think it's great to see short impulsive verse from passing experience. That's the way to do it I reckon. Should be encouraged.

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: Hey Frog !
Don't faint
but twice today I must say I agree with Neville. Those spontaneous poems (I call them elbow poems) are usually the best.
but twice today I must say I agree with Neville. Those spontaneous poems (I call them elbow poems) are usually the best.
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David J Delaney
Re: Hey Frog !
Goodonya Marty
I notice a little internal rhyme as well, yep, well done mate. 