Small typo in line 1 of stanza 3. if I felt a need
Starting out with nothing
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Neville Briggs
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Re: Starting out
That's very good. Top stuff Marty. I'm most impressed.
Small typo in line 1 of stanza 3. if I felt a need
Small typo in line 1 of stanza 3. if I felt a need
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
- keats
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Re: Starting out with nothing
Who is that Marty bloke? Never heard of the pauper. ll
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Terry
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Re: Starting out with nothing
G/day Marty,
I've known that feeling a few times as well mate; a bit like that song, 'I've Got plenty Of Nothing'
The modern version is 'Give me, Give me'
Another good one Marty.
Cheers Terry
I've known that feeling a few times as well mate; a bit like that song, 'I've Got plenty Of Nothing'
The modern version is 'Give me, Give me'
Another good one Marty.
Cheers Terry
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Re: Starting out with nothing
Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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Re: Starting out with nothing
Ah Ha always knew ya had nothin Boyce
Bob
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The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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r.magnay
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Re: Starting out with nothing
Good stuff Marty....we couldn't get devon, so we had to eat fritz!......... 
Ross
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Re: Starting out with nothing
Goodonya Marty, What with the carbon tax and a few other new expenses for the Gov we worked it out our pension is now on the negative side, but you would be surprised what you can find in the bins at the back of Coles.
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