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A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:10 pm
by Vic Jefferies
A POET’S DELIGHT

The sun was sinking in the west
as the sun is prone to do,
The twinkling stars so high above
shone from the velvet blue,
The breeze was sighing in the trees
all was peace and quiet -
Just the perfect setting
to see what clichés I could write!


Vic Jefferies

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:11 pm
by Heather
Aah, Vic, I was just beginning to sit back and enjoy the scenery! :lol: Good one! ;)

Heather :)

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:15 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: all in due time Vic actions speak louder than words. Anything goes these days so why make a mountain out of a ;) molehill.


Good poem - very clever

Cheers

Maureen

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:32 pm
by Dave Smith
Sweet.

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:08 pm
by Vic Jefferies
G'day Heather, Maureen and Dave, glad you enjoyed the little poem, but Maureen I am a having trouble understanding your cryptic comment.

Vic

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:16 pm
by Neville Briggs
Maureen's using clichés to answer you Vic :lol:

I liked the poem.

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:48 pm
by Bob Pacey
The quiet and write does not ring true for me Vic.

Love the poem and the pictures but that bit sticks out for me.


Robert

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 11:24 am
by Vic Jefferies
I was pretty slow on the uptake there Neville but in my defence I plead advancing years.
Bob thought about "quiet and write and think you are right," but thought I might be able to sneak it through because most people say quite not quye-et.

Vic

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 3:29 pm
by Neville Briggs
We'll accept advancing age Vic :lol:

I reckon that in Aussie drawl ,quoit rhymes with wroite, isn't that roight, just ask Julia Gillard.

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT

Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:01 am
by manfredvijars
Yep, woks for me too Vic, all depends on how you hold your tongue ...

I've often wondered what pastry had to do with "Somewhere, over the Rainbow"