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A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:10 pm
by Vic Jefferies
A POET’S DELIGHT
The sun was sinking in the west
as the sun is prone to do,
The twinkling stars so high above
shone from the velvet blue,
The breeze was sighing in the trees
all was peace and quiet -
Just the perfect setting
to see what clichés I could write!
Vic Jefferies
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:11 pm
by Heather
Aah, Vic, I was just beginning to sit back and enjoy the scenery!

Good one!
Heather

Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:15 pm
by Maureen K Clifford

all in due time Vic actions speak louder than words. Anything goes these days so why make a mountain out of a

molehill.
Good poem - very clever
Cheers
Maureen
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:32 pm
by Dave Smith
Sweet.
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:08 pm
by Vic Jefferies
G'day Heather, Maureen and Dave, glad you enjoyed the little poem, but Maureen I am a having trouble understanding your cryptic comment.
Vic
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:16 pm
by Neville Briggs
Maureen's using clichés to answer you Vic
I liked the poem.
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:48 pm
by Bob Pacey
The quiet and write does not ring true for me Vic.
Love the poem and the pictures but that bit sticks out for me.
Robert
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 11:24 am
by Vic Jefferies
I was pretty slow on the uptake there Neville but in my defence I plead advancing years.
Bob thought about "quiet and write and think you are right," but thought I might be able to sneak it through because most people say quite not quye-et.
Vic
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 3:29 pm
by Neville Briggs
We'll accept advancing age Vic
I reckon that in Aussie drawl
,quoit rhymes with
wroite, isn't that roight, just ask Julia Gillard.
Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:01 am
by manfredvijars
Yep, woks for me too Vic, all depends on how you hold your tongue ...
I've often wondered what pastry had to do with "Somewhere, over the Rainbow"