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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 12:36 am
by DinkyDi
Really I'm not sure why I wrote this but it's honest and I've come to believe honesty is what matters.

Maybe this will carry on to something else; mostly likely it won't but who knows?


Driven by expulsion
From life left unperturbed?
Completed; less; compulsion
Now stalls a storied world.
I never really rendered
My hope to find a way,
Bleatingly surrendered
Callously remade....
15/04/12 Ado

I told you guys I'm not a bush poet by the rules!
But my works rhyme and with meter; I can't help it if I delve a little deeper.

Re: You???????????????????????

Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 7:12 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Good to see you back here Adam - its been along time between drinks

Its good - probably one of those ones that you put in your kick and then later you think to yourself -aaah that's where it goes. Having said that it' still a nice little profound statement all on its own - not sure why but to me it is pointing towards the re surfacing of the thylacine - Tassie Tiger. There was talk that they had sufficient dna to clone the species .

Cheers

Maureen

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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 7:03 pm
by Zondrae
Welcome back Adam,

Why do you leave it so long between 'hits'? Now I'll go and read it again.

Re: You???????????????????????

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:30 pm
by DinkyDi
G'day Zondrae, honestly I've just lost the enthusiasm to write. Lacking inspiration or a muse or something I guess.

Re: You???????????????????????

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:31 pm
by DinkyDi
However with that said. I've just finished another. So maybe I've found it again I don't know.

Re: You???????????????????????

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:17 am
by Neville Briggs
Adam. I know what you mean about lacking enthusiasm, I get the same.

This is just guesswork on my part, but I wonder if reading is the antidote to inspirational doldrums.

I'll make a suggestion, read Dylan Thomas's poem Fern Hill ( it's on the web ) or his other one Do Not Go Gently Into That Good Night, see if they spark anything in your poetic soul. They should ;) :) .

Re: You???????????????????????

Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 7:18 pm
by DinkyDi
Exactly Marty, most of my inspiration comes from the music I listen to. I haven't bought anything new lately, so that's probably the reason. But when I do get some new tunes no doubt the pen will move again.

Till then I just enjoy the ones I have