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Re: once ago

Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 6:28 pm
by Neville Briggs
Good one Matt. The line breaks are in just the right place for the mood. :)
I've been told that is essential for good poetry. ;)

You shouldn't be writing like this yet, you're still young. ;) ;)

Re: once ago

Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 9:07 pm
by Dave Smith
Hey Matt are you talking about me, that’s a fair description.

A well presented verse. Goodonya.

TTFN 8-)

Re: once ago

Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 10:10 pm
by Heather
He may be young (ish), but he's been here before I reckon Neville and learnt a thing or two. ;) Is that cheating do ya reckon?

I like it Matt.

Heather :)

Re: once ago

Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:13 am
by warooa
I dunno where he's been Heather, but wherever it is he's taken it all in.

They're few and far between, Matt but well worth waiting for.

Cheers, Marty

Re: once ago

Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:38 am
by Glenny Palmer
.........I'm never gunna give you cheek Matty...........look out!

........ :D :D

Re: once ago

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 6:31 pm
by Terry
Never mind the Ferrari Matt,
a Troopie might suit you better Mate.

Terry

Re: once ago

Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:17 am
by Neville Briggs
I wonder how many bush poets would recognise the quality of sprawl when you cut down your ferrari to a bush basher. ;) :)