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Re: once ago
Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 6:28 pm
by Neville Briggs
Good one Matt. The line breaks are in just the right place for the mood.
I've been told that is essential for good poetry.
You shouldn't be writing like this yet, you're still young.

Re: once ago
Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 9:07 pm
by Dave Smith
Hey Matt are you talking about me, that’s a fair description.
A well presented verse. Goodonya.
TTFN

Re: once ago
Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 10:10 pm
by Heather
He may be young (ish), but he's been here before I reckon Neville and learnt a thing or two.

Is that cheating do ya reckon?
I like it Matt.
Heather

Re: once ago
Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:13 am
by warooa
I dunno where he's been Heather, but wherever it is he's taken it all in.
They're few and far between, Matt but well worth waiting for.
Cheers, Marty
Re: once ago
Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:38 am
by Glenny Palmer
.........I'm never gunna give
you cheek Matty...........look out!
........

Re: once ago
Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 6:31 pm
by Terry
Never mind the Ferrari Matt,
a Troopie might suit you better Mate.
Terry
Re: once ago
Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:17 am
by Neville Briggs
I wonder how many bush poets would recognise the quality of sprawl when you cut down your ferrari to a bush basher.
