Forever and a Day
- alongtimegone
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Forever and a Day
We sat within the quiet;
my dad and me that day.
And I wished that we could sit like this
forever and a day.
He was trying hard to tell me
that he had to go away.
He said, “But I’ll still love you
forever and a day."
"See - your mum and I have spoken
and it’s I who can not stay."
he said, “But I’ll still love you
forever and a day."
I didn’t understand of course
all that he had to say.
But I knew my heart would ache for him
forever and a day.
my dad and me that day.
And I wished that we could sit like this
forever and a day.
He was trying hard to tell me
that he had to go away.
He said, “But I’ll still love you
forever and a day."
"See - your mum and I have spoken
and it’s I who can not stay."
he said, “But I’ll still love you
forever and a day."
I didn’t understand of course
all that he had to say.
But I knew my heart would ache for him
forever and a day.
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Re: Forever and a Day
Sad - You capture a common problem in todays world. I reckon so many kids go through this but is it better for them to have parents who are constantly fighting ? I personally don't think so
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Re: Forever and a Day
The sad reality in so many families in this challenging world.
You've captured the emotion so well, Wazza.
Cheers, Shelley
You've captured the emotion so well, Wazza.
Cheers, Shelley
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Re: Forever and a Day
Children will never understand the reasons why. A decision made in the best interest of the child is never a decision made by a child.
Nicely expressed, Wazza.
Nicely expressed, Wazza.
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Re: Forever and a Day
Very well captured Wazza - the simplicity of this poem highlights the sadness.
- alongtimegone
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Re: Forever and a Day
Affecting so many families. Almost the norm these days. Thank you for your comments.
Wazza
Wazza
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Re: Forever and a Day
Thanks Heather.