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Ron
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Homework

Post by Ron » Fri Jun 13, 2014 8:14 am

Bit late, but then I always was with homework :D

Seasons

A scorching Summer ‘tis a thief of shade
That sears and blisters, all that is exposed,
Relief in Autumns, first cool breath resides
Leaves falling, branches stark a hint provides
Of Winters depth, impending then imposed
With daylight robbed and, frigid scene displayed,
But blessed, the waking buds as new birds sing,
So fresh, so welcome is a newborn Spring!


© Ron Boughton
June 2014

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Re: Homework

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jun 13, 2014 11:00 am

Worth waiting for though Ron - Lovely to see you having a go at this one - and you captured the seasons beautifully. Well done

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Re: Homework

Post by Ron » Fri Jun 13, 2014 5:35 pm

Thanks Maureen,
Love the special effects that you have done with the photo, great stuff! thanks again.
Ron

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Re: Homework

Post by mummsie » Fri Jun 13, 2014 5:53 pm

Your poetic side really shines here Ron-lovely.
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Re: Homework

Post by Ron » Fri Jun 13, 2014 7:33 pm

Thanks so much for the compliment Sue, pleased that you enjoyed it. :)

Ron

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