homework 15/12 Turon Gold.

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Re: homework 15/12 Turon Gold.

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:08 am

Thanks Bob :)
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Re: homework 15/12 Turon Gold.

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Dec 10, 2014 4:39 pm

Really enjoyed this Neville - very evocative.

I agree that the Kyrielle is quite different from a "normal" Petrarchan or Shakespearean sonnet. I think I commented before that it reminds me a bit of a Villanelle but only in the line repetition characteristic.

One thing is for sure - it's a challenge. I'm still working on mine :ugeek:

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