The Music of the River's Flow

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Neville Briggs
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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Dec 08, 2014 4:21 pm

:lol:
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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by Heather » Mon Dec 08, 2014 4:30 pm

There's been a fry bit of editing going on here.


Oops. Sly that is, sly. :lol:

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Catherine Lee
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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by Catherine Lee » Tue Dec 09, 2014 2:15 pm

I really like this - beautiful poem with a smooth flow - well done!

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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Dec 09, 2014 6:28 pm

Thank you Catherine ...
Neville and Heather ... glad I was able to give you opportunities to chat, but I'm on your side Heather and that's not just because you are smart and perceptive ... well maybe it is. :)

Sorry shouldn't have added that. I mean the bit I edited out. :?
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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by Heather » Tue Dec 09, 2014 6:38 pm

I'm all that? Right I'd like a pay rise then please! :)

Caught ya Warren! I got a laugh!

Heather :)

PS it will be our little secret..... ;)

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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Dec 09, 2014 6:59 pm

Thanks Heather. :oops:

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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by Heather » Tue Dec 09, 2014 7:06 pm

Warren......are you blushing? How sweet!


.......and I'm still giggling.

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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Dec 09, 2014 7:25 pm

Enough! Enough! My face is red because I've had a couple of red wines ... always happens. :D

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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Dec 10, 2014 4:34 pm

I hardly dare join the melee - but I will, to say I really enjoyed the music metaphor, Warren! Well done from me :)

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Re: The Music of the River's Flow

Post by alongtimegone » Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:02 am

Thank you Shelley.

Wazza

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