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Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Jan 30, 2015 7:56 pm

Just to show those disbelievers that I do appreciate what Maureen does.

So how about it the rest of you slackers I wrote this after two rums so for the rest of ya it should be easy,


Fishing
shimmering beach
waves crash, foaming, boiling
sunshine glaring against the sand
Dreaming

Whiting
bright flash of scales
fighting in shallow swells
line tightens and is holding firm
Dinner


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Re: Homework

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jan 30, 2015 8:58 pm

Perfect Robere - just grilled with a little butter and some lemon juice please :lol:

I know you appreciate what I do - our chiaking is just fun between mates and hope everyone realises that :roll:

I like your Cinquain and that is a great catch of whiting?? Enjoy
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Re: Homework

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Jan 30, 2015 9:17 pm

I know Mausie but you are gonna have to show me how to do that with the piccies .


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