HOMEWORK TO 28/03/11 - Baby Cakes

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Re: HOMEWORK TO 28/03/11 - Baby Cakes

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:45 pm

OMG Marty you are quick off the mark....clever use of prompts too Mate. Think I'll pass on the taste testing though :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: HOMEWORK TO 28/03/11 - Baby Cakes

Post by Dave Smith » Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:27 pm

Hey Marty I love it, all my Great-grandbabies are so gorgeous I could eat em. :P

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Re: HOMEWORK TO 28/03/11 - Baby Cakes

Post by Zondrae » Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:00 am

G'day Marty,

and do they come in flavours
these baby cakes of yours?
Like lovely talcum powder
or maybe kitten claws?

Are tops all iced in patterns?
with big blue eyes - my guess.
Or then perhas a dummy
made in a lolly press.

Kittens for ingredients?
a lic'rice whiskered job?
would sell like little hot cakes
around my local mob.
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Re: HOMEWORK TO 28/03/11 - Baby Cakes

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:57 am

Oh that is cute Zondrae but why have you posted it as a reply - bad girl - go put it up on it's own as well where it can shine.
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Re: HOMEWORK TO 28/03/11 - Baby Cakes

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:57 pm

When i read the first bit I was thinking of little brown cakes !!!!! Thought they might be a little smelly ????

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