Grandma's Secret Hiding Place

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:17 am

Good one Trisha - nicely done. These prompts seem to be bringing out ghosts in old buildings and sad stories

I liked your use of the word PELF - as in money, especially when gained in a dishonest or dishonourable way. That was a good pick up and different.

Your use of the prompts was excellent

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:25 am

Thanks Maureen. Appreciate the feedback.
Trish

vwalla · Post by **vwalla** » Fri Jun 19, 2015 1:28 pm

Trish
Nicely crafted
Val W

Post by **Shelley Hansen** » Fri Jun 19, 2015 4:58 pm

Well written indeed, Trish! I like the use of the word "pelf" also - so long since I've seen it, I had forgotten its meaning!

Cheers, Shelley

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Fri Jun 19, 2015 5:36 pm

Thanks Val & Shelley. The word "pelf" almost sounds like something quite sinister!
Trish

David Campbell · Post by **David Campbell** » Sat Jun 20, 2015 10:23 am

Intriguing, Trish..."curiouser and curiouser", as Alice would have said. Who was the mysterious Eloise, and what happened to her?

David

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Sat Jun 20, 2015 12:36 pm

Can't reveal too much, for therein lies the mystery and intrigue!

Trish

Catherine Lee · Post by **Catherine Lee** » Sat Jun 20, 2015 4:12 pm

A clever and enjoyable poem Trish that leaves you wanting to learn more!

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Sat Jun 20, 2015 7:13 pm

Thanks Catherine. Glad you enjoyed.
Trish

ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

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