Homework June 29th

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Catherine Lee
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Re: Homework June 29th

Post by Catherine Lee » Sun Jun 21, 2015 3:19 pm

Eek! Thanks David, on both counts! It was actually meant to be read 'scattered', but because that word is so similar maybe it's best to say: 'The ruby shards of shattered glass lie strewn across the floor' - thanks so much for picking this up for me.
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