WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Aug 17, 2015 5:12 am

Lots out there falling through the cracks Trish


A beautiful and well timed write .


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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Aug 17, 2015 11:21 am

Well they may be getting harder (blame Bob) but by crikey they are certainly winkling out some great poetry. I am going to share this one onto our Facebook page Trish - hope you don't mind, it is a great use of the prompts and a lovely write. Well done.
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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by Trisha Patterson » Mon Aug 17, 2015 2:20 pm

Thanks Bob & Maureen. I almost didn't write a poem from those prompts, but the muse insisted! :lol:
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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by Catherine Lee » Mon Aug 17, 2015 7:24 pm

Beautifully written, poignant piece Trish and you've used the prompts so well - saw this on FB too and have read it a few times over. Well done!
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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by Shelley Hansen » Tue Aug 18, 2015 1:10 pm

Just great, Trish! I agree with Maureen - some top poems are being spawned by these tricky prompts!!

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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by Trisha Patterson » Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:49 pm

Thanks Catherine & Shelley.
The prompts are certainly yielding some varied and interesting results lately. It is refreshing to read such diversity.
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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by alongtimegone » Wed Aug 19, 2015 12:16 pm

Loved it Trisha - really loved it.
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Re: WHAT WILL BE, WILL BE

Post by Trisha Patterson » Thu Aug 20, 2015 1:35 pm

Many thanks Wazza.
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