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Homework Paper Wings

Post by Bob Pacey » Sun Dec 20, 2015 10:30 am

Paper Wings


Paper wings placed in a box hidden with the shoes and sox
Sit a while and sort them out wonder what it's all about.
Ribbons, bows and plastic twine pull now at his heart of mine
Things grow darker through the years but still I shed some loving tears
The box is placed back in it's draw as I wonder what I kept it for
Just little things that make me glum, memories of my long lost mum.


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Re: Homework Paper Wings

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Dec 20, 2015 6:40 pm

How lovely Bob - that you have a keepsake drawer full of precious things of your Mums. No reason to feel sad when viewing the contents, rather recall the happy memories that she blessed you with.

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Re: Homework Paper Wings

Post by Catherine Lee » Mon Dec 21, 2015 9:06 pm

I agree Bob, this is lovely and such poignant treasures are beyond price.

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Re: Homework Paper Wings

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Dec 22, 2015 8:48 pm

Yep ... I'll second all of that Bob. Nice!
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