Homework 25/12/18

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Fri Dec 07, 2018 4:21 pm

carol singers chime
fat santa gives out lollies
children's faces shine

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Sat Dec 08, 2018 9:02 am

a topical Haiku Neville, just right for the season - well done. I love Haiku's

Terry · Post by **Terry** » Sat Dec 08, 2018 9:59 am

It nearly rhymes Neville.
A bit like mine mate, started with promise . . . .

Cheers Terry

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Sat Dec 08, 2018 3:03 pm

Thanks Terry, Maureen. Haiku are like me, not as simple as they look

this one took four revisions until I thought it might work.

Terry · Post by **Terry** » Sat Dec 08, 2018 6:30 pm

Only Teasing Neville

Nice Haiku

Terry

ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association