The Shadow on The Stairs

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Catherine Lee
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Re: The Shadow on The Stairs

Post by Catherine Lee » Sat Jun 20, 2015 4:29 pm

Nooooo Bob, don't throw it away! This poem tells a different story and I really enjoyed reading it! Just tidy up a couple of those lines Maureen mentions like the 'I turned towards the staircase...' one, and it will flow even better.
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