Homework week ending 29/08 Friendship beyond price

[Maureen K Clifford]

That is bloody good Marty - a bit of polish on that Mate and I reckon it will shine like the star it is. Well done. Really like this. Is it based on a true story??????

Cheers
Maureen

[Maureen K Clifford]

Mate you could have them daily as another site I am on does - but some folks get a bit freaked out by that thought.

[Heather]

Another great poem Marty. You are really turning out some great stuff.

Heather

[Bob Pacey]

Do you actually work for a living Marty ?????

Go on I'm waiting for it.


Bob

[Heather]

Then we won't see you so much hey Marty!

[Bob Pacey]

Private sector ?????? sound a bit official you are not going into a pub are you old friend old buddy old pal.


Bob

[Bob Pacey]

Ok ok ok I heard you the first time.

Gonna cull your writing time ???

Bob

[Maureen K Clifford]

Think of it like a car Mate.

Brighten up the chrome wherever it is a bit dull (GIVE IT A PUNCH LINE OR A TWIST IN THE TAIL).
Check that all the screws (PUNCTUATION) are in the right spots - missing ones might cause things to drop off and tighten up any loose ones for the same reason.
Make sure the tank is full and that it is heading in the right direction,(IS THE STORY LINE CLEAR) wandering off or taking short cuts never saves time.
Touch up any stone chips (SPELLING, NON RHYMES, SIGHT RHYMES, METRE),
Cut out any surface rust (THOSE BACK TO FRONT THINGIES NEVILLE DON'T LIKE)
and then when you have done all the basics and it is pretty schmick ( 9 OUT OF 10)
Give it coat of wax to make it SHINE (10 OUT OF 10)


there you go Marty - bloke talk

[Terry]

Yea well done Marty, and quick of the mark as well.

Cheers Terry

[Maureen K Clifford]

probably no worse than my 24 year old Nissan Ute - workhorses not show ponies