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homework w/e 12/9 defiant scoundrel

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Sep 01, 2011 5:22 pm

Here lies a defiant scoundrel,
His fortune was robbing banks.
But when he took aim at the coppers,
He found they weren't firing blanks.
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Re: homework w/e 12/9 defiant scoundrel

Post by Heather » Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:18 pm

Short, and to the point Neville!

His fortune was robbing banks or he "made" his fortune robbing banks?

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Re: homework w/e 12/9 defiant scoundrel

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:09 am

WHO, WHERE, WHEN....So many questions and so few answers....short and to the point Neville did your pen run out of ink Mate :lol: :lol: :lol: or is this a legal brief. :?

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Re: homework w/e 12/9 defiant scoundrel

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:29 pm

Ah thank you for the replies ladies.

You both said it is to the point....weight's right ;)

As I sit here in my organic turtle-neck jumper and non-GM beret, is seems to me that to add anything or explain, would be a bourgeois reactionary intimidation of the cosmic consciousness. I'm off now to cachinate with my free-range bongos. :ugeek:
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Re: homework w/e 12/9 defiant scoundrel

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:41 pm

Good oh Neville :?
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Re: homework w/e 12/9 defiant scoundrel

Post by Heather » Fri Sep 02, 2011 4:23 pm

Whatever ! 8-)

Somehow can't imagine the beret though Neville. :lol:
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