Homework w/e/ 26/9

[Neville Briggs]

This is a quick sketch that I did of a young lady out in a western town of NSW.
She's the inspiration for my poem.

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WILD AND FREE.


Dark eyed girl sits quiet on the path
outside the noisy pub,
her parents drink in there.
She wears a clean white blouse,
but no ribbon in her hair.

There once was a time,
when they roamed wild and free
from Dareton to Cunnamulla;
along the living rivers.
Now, home is the " mission",
they live by the pension,
it's ruin that welfare delivers.

Dark eyed girl sits by herself
outside the crowded pub,
her parents; drunk in there.
There is dust getting onto her blouse
and she hasn't brushed her hair.

[Bob Pacey]

Drawings Nice !!!


Bob

[Maureen K Clifford]

CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING THE FIRST TO POST & THE DRAWING IS TERRIFIC - getting the eyes right is always the hardest part or so I am told but you have real expression in the eyes of your drawing - love the shading under the eyes and around the mouth - you have shown another hidden talent Neville - thank you for sharing and I do hope you will share more of your sketches with us.

The old welfare argument raises its ugly head again - half of the problem I reckon probably more than half -truth to tell and lots of kids in a similar situation no doubt. Well captured all round

Cheers

Maureen

[william williams]

CON GRATS NEVILLE your poem and drawing has captured the sadness that cultured whites have destroyed the cultures out back.

bill williams

[mummsie]

A lot of hidden meaning in this one Neville, well done. Great drawing as well, man of many talents.


SUE

[Neville Briggs]

Thanks for all the replies. Bob,very kind . Maureen, I appreciate your enthusiasm. Bill, I knew you would get it . Sue, I was hoping someone might look a bit more than the surface, good on you.
The picture was done in 1994 but I remember that little girl and her family. Her uncle, one day undid his shirt and I was amazed to see that he had on his chest the big stripes of tribal initiation scars.

Marty..The structure; rhyming/accentual-metre, on an Australian theme.

I prefer to call the structure , The Question. Which is; are you moved to compassion at the plight of Australian children who are going to get dragged down into the never ending intergenerational cycle of dysfunction and hopelessness. ?

[Maureen K Clifford]

Totally moved Neville and totally saddened that nothing seems to change and I know wheels grind slow. If wishes were horses......

[Neville Briggs]

You're right Maureen. Nothing changes. One thing I discovered out west is that freighting liquor to far west NSW towns is a multi-million dollar business and the millions of dollars of profit comes from the pockets of welfare recipients. And I found out what happens if you dare to challenge the legality and ethics of the profiteers.

[Heather]

Great to see some of your artwork Neville. Sad poem; a sad existence. If only we could turn back time hey?

Heather

[Neville Briggs]

Thanks Heather. It's very tragic..there are a lot of if onlys.