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Writing Workshop

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:22 pm
by DollyDot
I'm not sure about this but here goes!
There once was a lassie named Sal
Who saw that her middle did swell.
Her mother found out
And gave her a clout
Sal thought that her life would be hell!

But Tim from next door made a claim
He knew that he was same
He gave her a ring
They wed in the Spring
And now have to pick out a name!

And after their girl came at last
They made a decision real fast
And called her Leanne
The name of the Gran
And now all the shame’s in the past!

Jack & Jill

There once was a fellow named Bill
Who loved to climb up the hill
Was taken aback
When he saw that Jack
Was kissing his lassie sweet Jill.


Help needed!

Cheers

Dolly

Re: Writing Workshop

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:33 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
I don't think you need any help Dolly - they look really good. Was it some other kind of help you needed perhaps, changing a tyre, fixing a washer :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Re: Writing Workshop

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:42 pm
by Robyn
Well done Dot!
Robyn

Re: Writing Workshop

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:39 pm
by DollyDot
Thank-you Maureen and Robyn. You are too kind!

Re: Writing Workshop

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:34 pm
by Bob Pacey
They are being genuine Dot it is when they say "thank you for shareing "

That you should get concerned.

Not a lover of limericks but well done.


Bob

Re: Writing Workshop

Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:35 am
by Heather
Well I do love limericks and I think you did a great job Dot. I laughed. Keep them coming!

Heather :)

Re: Writing Workshop

Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 2:11 pm
by Neville Briggs
Well done Dot :lol: :lol: