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?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12

Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:59 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
????

This is a test – some will get it but other will struggle.
It is all about understanding
and getting away with murder.
Some would think it out of focus
and even perhaps walking the road to ruin.
But such criticisms are like drops of water
rolling down a window pane and puddling
on the sill below.

I merely wonder if anybody is coming up for air.

Maureen Clifford © 10/12
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Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12

Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 6:43 pm
by william williams
This will be a test so you say but I will struggle to try and get it
But it's a question? That I don't understanding
but if I find out how. Can I get away with murder.
for this story that you tell. Is out of focus
for when you who walk the road to ruin.
why do you criticize the actions, like a drop of water
that roll down a window pane to below.


So I merely wonder, if the answer is, coming up for air.


bw

Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12

Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 3:41 pm
by Neville Briggs
huh???? :shock:

Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12

Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 7:09 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Oh Neville I was hoping for more than a Huh :(

My sad attempt at trying to stir something by sticking a bit of free verse in here . I figured everyone must be holding their breath waiting for ??????? something

Our homework seems is too hard this time round and no one want's to play in the sandpit :cry: :cry:
Well Marty did and Bill stuck his nose in but........................oh well never mind :lol: :lol: :lol: I'll get over it.

Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12

Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 8:36 am
by Neville Briggs
Maureen, I wasn't huhing on the verse, I was not sure what you were meaning to say ;) :)

I always have a think about the homework, I can't always come up with something to post. And I always read the ones that do get posted. :) :) Sometimes I even annoy them by commenting. :roll: :o