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Homework w/e 18.3.13

Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:05 pm
by Robyn
Village street

The village store;
fresh eggs, good coffee, art, fig jam,
old books and more.

The butcher’s shop,
with smell of meat, a chink of steel
and cleaver’s chop.

Strong petrol fumes,
the bowser’s whirr, a spanner’s clink,
exhaust smoke plumes.

A weedy park
a broken swing, some scratchy sand,
kids after dark.

Untimely death
hot tears, warm cakes, kind arms entwined,
soft baby’s breath.

Community
support in need, the casseroles
of unity.

Robyn Sykes

Re: Homework w/e 18.3.13

Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:31 pm
by Heather
Nicely done Robyn. :)

Heather :)

Re: Homework w/e 18.3.13

Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:22 am
by Neville Briggs
Very good Robyn. :) :)

Re: Homework w/e 18.3.13

Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:44 am
by vwalla
Robyn
Brings back fond memories
Val W

Re: Homework w/e 18.3.13

Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:43 am
by mummsie
Very clever Robyn-I really like that.

Sue

Re: Homework w/e 18.3.13

Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:17 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
You met the challenge Robyn and beautifully done - good on you . Lovely vignettes

Cheers

Maureen

Re: Homework w/e 18.3.13

Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 2:41 pm
by Robyn
Thanks Heather, Neville, Val, Sue and Maureen. And thanks Maureen for the topic. It really got my brain working!
Cheers
Robyn