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Re: Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears
Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 6:44 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Love it Marty - well done - that last verse is pretty powerful
Forever young while we grow old
a very touching description that I suspect would be how so many people feel when a young life is taken before its time
Cheers
Maureen
Re: Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears
Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:19 pm
by warooa
It fell out pretty good I reckon
Re: Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears
Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:46 pm
by Heather
Yep, good to see you writing Marty.
Heather
Re: Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears
Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:37 pm
by Terry
Yep I agree Marty,
That's a really good effort.
Terry
Re: Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears
Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 7:17 am
by Bob Pacey
Not bad for an old cart driver Marty
Thought you had been a bit quiet of late
have not been told to sod off for a while.
Cheers Bob
Re: Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears
Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 10:04 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Oh Marty you loved your carriage driving!
Do hope there has not been some disaster overcome you or the horses
Re: Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears
Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 1:46 pm
by Neville Briggs
Keep going Marty, I'm sure you have plenty more to come out.