Well it's different, I reckon it works. It's rather clever in its way although I reckon some of the descriptions are perhaps less that totally accurate but I get the meaning well enough. Do we have gloaming in Australia? Well I suppose it is just another word for dusk or twilight isn't it, so I suppose we do. It has rather a Robbie Burns - the Scot - feel to it.
Anyway having a go is what it is all about and keeping the muse going and it makes a lot more sense than some of the free verse stuff I've been reading lately. Good on you Marty I can always count on your support.
Well done.
Cheers
Maureen
Homework week ending 27th May 2013 - The Endless road
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